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Well you got Kari pretty spot on to me. I wish i'd wrote the entry better but I already wrote back 
I'm going to bed soon. idk when but soon
I'm going to bed soon. idk when but soon
I posted I decided we can just write short quick replies for conversation, I really dont want to have to write for karillian, I don't know about you but I really hate having my characters controlled in anything, cause you know how you know everything they're thinking which directs their actions and other people just dont get it, and I really dont want ot mess up with her
ohh...sorry if that's casue of me. you can make somthing up if you want...you know how to write non trusting
ya i have a lot done for when Hannah comes but I have to finish the other one first
not at the moment may be off and on have to study for science
haha, no way. everything's better with details. OJ with cranberry mixed in...idk why but it sounds cool and i have proof it tastes awesome.
ya what does kari prefer to drink fo breakfast, I know dumb question but it makes everything more interesting with dialogue
She leaves Trei to change and take a quick check on Zayde...and then from there idk if you wanted him to change or whatever. she doesnt want to be in white cause Sunste's only seen her in white and she's not taking chances...does that help??
wait I got all they way up until she left Trei to wake up, Im lost, sorry (sheepish grin hypothetically)
thanks...here's basically what I was thinking:
Kari looked up at Trei annoyed but dog tired. She took in his sight and then couldnt help it, she stared up at the ceiling, a hand clasped on her mouth to stop the flow of insults that so could have made her morning. Some-how, Kari managed to keep her pie hole shutt but couldnt stop snickering and laughing silently for a few seconds before she regained herself and looked at Trei in the eye, avoiding looking down for fear of laughing hard again. She realized he was barely awake, but then again, she was only a bit more awake than he was.
Okay and then when he asks her however that happens...this is kinda what would happen for there...
Kari looked in shock at the prince, her instincts kicked in before her mind. "Are you serious? Or just messing with me?" her eyes narrowed, but he was actually honest....(farther on..a bit not much) Kari faced her room, Zay had turned normal again and had slept like a baby for a good two hours now, and she knew he'd be out for another hour atleast. Kari barely smiled, but she smiled. "Just let me get out of this, I'm in yesterday's clothes and white, I'm not taking the chance Sunste could recognize me since he's only seen me in white." Kari left Trei to wake up, pulled her shirt off and grabbed a fresh light brown one before grabbing a new pair of black breeches and pulling on her boots again. Kari didnt bother with her hair, it was just enough okay that it could pass.
Other than that, I think you can write for Kari...just remember snotty but nice...when she's not offended first and hyper (on edge) if someone she doesnt trust at all gets near her. need anything else??
Kari looked up at Trei annoyed but dog tired. She took in his sight and then couldnt help it, she stared up at the ceiling, a hand clasped on her mouth to stop the flow of insults that so could have made her morning. Some-how, Kari managed to keep her pie hole shutt but couldnt stop snickering and laughing silently for a few seconds before she regained herself and looked at Trei in the eye, avoiding looking down for fear of laughing hard again. She realized he was barely awake, but then again, she was only a bit more awake than he was.
Okay and then when he asks her however that happens...this is kinda what would happen for there...
Kari looked in shock at the prince, her instincts kicked in before her mind. "Are you serious? Or just messing with me?" her eyes narrowed, but he was actually honest....(farther on..a bit not much) Kari faced her room, Zay had turned normal again and had slept like a baby for a good two hours now, and she knew he'd be out for another hour atleast. Kari barely smiled, but she smiled. "Just let me get out of this, I'm in yesterday's clothes and white, I'm not taking the chance Sunste could recognize me since he's only seen me in white." Kari left Trei to wake up, pulled her shirt off and grabbed a fresh light brown one before grabbing a new pair of black breeches and pulling on her boots again. Kari didnt bother with her hair, it was just enough okay that it could pass.
Other than that, I think you can write for Kari...just remember snotty but nice...when she's not offended first and hyper (on edge) if someone she doesnt trust at all gets near her. need anything else??
Trei pushed himself upright on his bed. He rubbed the weariness from his eyes and let out a big yawn. Light streamed in from the windows, Trei guessed it was probably seven in the morning. He slid his feet over the edge of the bed and stood. He stretched a little before he walked, half asleep, to the door. He left his room in search of breakfast, his hunger welling up inside him. Still in his boxers, he made his way out into the hallway, his feet cold against the stone floor. He rubbed his eyes again and was surprised when he ran into someone. He opened his eyes to see it was Karillian. ?Oh, hey,? Trei mumbled but had to stop when another big yawn came on. ?Katya,? He finished. He realized he was still in his boxers, which wasn?t weird that was how he walked around most mornings but he wasn?t sure if that was inappropriate or something. Whatever, Trei thought to himself, no fixing it now.
Thats what I have so far, depends on what she says but he'll ask if she wants to go to the kitchen for breakfast, just leaving room for a snide comment if you want one
Thats what I have so far, depends on what she says but he'll ask if she wants to go to the kitchen for breakfast, just leaving room for a snide comment if you want one
uhh..sorry I couldnt find any pic. He's dirty blonde and light tan. Odd but intersting blue eyes and muscular like general muscular and tall. He's 28 if I remember right.
nope nowhere for the wekend and id write back but i dont know what sunste looks like and its kind of important, and i thought only two countries where bad?
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